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Old 03-02-2003, 04:22 PM   [Ignore Me] #1
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The Patriotic Sniper


The Vanu were scared of him. The New Conglomerate hated him. The Terran loved and idolized him. He was a sniper, best know for taking out the New Conglomerate Commander during seige against a Terran Base. If the NC had one, the Continent would have went into lockdown mode, but after he killed the commander that was giving orders the NC fell apart and were repelled.

No one knows his true name, not even his commanding officer, everyone simply called him the Unknown Killer.

Today the Terran republic scouts notified their headquarters of a small NC movement that was heading towards the Terran Dropship center. Over a period of 5 hours several more reports of larger NC groups heading towards the Dropship center reached the headquarters.

The Dropship center was put of full alert, and a group of 500 terran, uncluding the Unknown was sent to help reinforce the Dropship Center. The Snipers were under the Unknown killer's order, as they usually were. He ordered them to there stations, one ontop of the base, another on a tower a little bit away, and 2 more in a patch of dense trees facing a road where the main group of NC was belived to be coming. The Unknown himself, took his time finding himself a stuitable sniping spot, one in which he could be unseen, but get out of quickly if trouble should occur. He choose an area which had a group of densly covered trees with brown and red leaves, along with some boulders from which he could move around.

3 hours had passed since the Unknown had set up his position, he was still ordering his team to survey the area for enemy troops. All of the terran was in place and ready for the NC.

The troops were beginning to doze off, and the commanders were wondering if the NC had truly been coming for the Dropship center. then all of a sudden *static*"This is Unknown, order all possible Galaxy pilots to grab one and fly to headquarters, we have company, and they bought their friends. Over."

The commanders immediately knew that if the Unknown meant there was a lot, then there were tons, over the intercom system "All Galaxy Pilots are to take a galaxy to Main headquarters" played every 3 minutes repeatedly. The High Commander Spoke to The Unknown "How do you know there's so many?" *static* "I'm looking at them." All the terran in the room fell silent. "Unknown where are you? You are not appearing on radar." *crackle* They heard the cracke that signaled the unknown was about to talk, but all they heard was breathing...*crackle**crackle*"THUMP!" they heard over the radio. "I'm with the NC," the Unknown said with a grave voice. "Thats not possible!" *crackle* "Please do not give them reason to prove that I am here, sir." The commander immediately ordered a terran working the controls to start tracing Unknowns signal, the Terran went furious to work, trying to lock in on the signal to pin-point the Unknowns location. "I'll have it in 2 minutes sir."
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Old 03-02-2003, 04:27 PM   [Ignore Me] #2
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Old 03-02-2003, 04:34 PM   [Ignore Me] #3
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Old 03-02-2003, 04:36 PM   [Ignore Me] #4
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The Commander nodded in approval, and then sent an officer to order group of 150 Terran to group up and prepare for launch. The commander spoke to the Unknown "What do they want?" "The Dropship Center," came a deep voice that wasn't like the Unknowns over the radio. "Name yourself" the commander demanded. "You don't need to know my name you terran pig. You listen up now. You leave your Dropship Center or we will kill your 'Unknown'." The commander looked around, to find the rest of his officers as stunned and feared as he was. "You know I can't do that." He replied. "I assumed so, but frankly thats ok with me, because we will win anyways. Here's your last warning. You have 3 minutes." *crackle*

Thinking the transmission was over the Commander turned to the terran and asked if he had gotten the location, "Not yet sir, about another 30 seconds, sir." 'Damnit." All of a sudden a voice, panting a puffing came on the radio screaming Sector 1.9 Alignment 3.4 X 5.1 Aplha!" Then there was a gunshot over the radio. the commander instantly recognized the voice as The Unknowns. He turned to his officers. 'Men! Gather your troups! I want 4 squads heading to those sectors NOW! One squad stay here." he turned to the terran at the computer, "send out messages telling all available men to come here." He straightened his back, we're gonna need help. (to be continued)
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Old 03-02-2003, 05:33 PM   [Ignore Me] #5
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(A note to all people writing fan fiction....COPY IT BEFORE YOU HIT POST! I just did that now my 2 pages or writing is gone because I posted before 30 seconds....ok, lets try this again)
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Old 03-02-2003, 05:34 PM   [Ignore Me] #6
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good job keep writing.........
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Old 03-02-2003, 06:23 PM   [Ignore Me] #7
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The Commander walked outside the base, already to find that half the Terran knew about the incident and were preparing for battle, but just in case he said over the intercom "My fellow Terran, this is Commander Squeeky...as most of you know we have lost one of our own in the past few minutes. He was commonly known as The Unknown, though some prefer the Unknow Killer. Which I think are both appropriate. However, it should be noted that before sacrificing his life for the Terran, he gave us the cordinates to their main position. We are now organizing an attack on that position on both ground and air. Prepare yourself for war."

He hung up the intercom phone and looked at 3 terran that had already formed to his left. "Hamma reporting for duty sir! Along with Dr_Ron and DarkDragon00." "hamma where are the rest of your men?" Squeeky asked. "Preparing their ships and readying their weapons sir." "Good" Squeeky replied, "Follow me." Squeeky walked back into the base and took a left into the breifing room. He touched the panel and a map of the ontinent popped up, and then zoomed in to their location, and the enemies.

Hamma, you will be leading the three Mosquitos in the initial run to cover the Galaxies, which DarkDragon00 will be leading. After your initial run of escorting the Galxies too and from the battlefield you will be taking reavers, or remaining in your mosquitos if it suits you better." Squeeky then turned to Dr_Ron "Dr_Ron you will be leading the group of 10 Reavers to take out any air units you encounter." Dr_Ron nodded in agreement, and smiled as he had a lust for battle. The command then looked towards DarkDragon00 and said "DarkDragon00, you and your three teammates will be piloting the Galaxies." The commander then turned to screen which had now switched to showing the land and a Galaxy flying above it "you will be performing a low-drop." The screen then begins to show animations and Squeeky describes it "You will stay high, then drop to as lowest altitude as possible and slow down, your passengers will then unload and you will speed of, your gunners providing covering fire for the newly deployed troops. You may then come back, drop off the galaxy and return to the battle how you wish. Any Questions?" "No Sir!" The three said in unison. "You are dismissed." and the Pilots went off to inform their squads and get ready.

The commander then pressed a button on the screen and it returned it to the map. Then Whacko, the Leader of Terran high Command, with Derfud and culkid behind him. "Good, I expect you are already readying yourselves?" "Yes sir!" they said in unison. "Good, heres the plan." Squeeky motioned to the screen as it zoomed in again. "Whacko will be the main frontal assualt, while Derfud and culkid will be flanking. Whacko you are to stay to both sides of the main routes. While culkid takes the left flank and Derfud takes the right. All you of will have an assortment of Marauders, Prowlers and lightnings. I will leave it up to you to disperse the vehicles eavenly, along with the men that are walking, but Whacko, you have to be sure that an AMS comes in about 2 minutes into the battle, a good distance away but not to far. Understood?" "Yes sir!" "Good, have your scouts be on wraiths and have them depart in 10 minutes, we will be leaving in about 13 minutes. Tell them to get more exact locations on the enemy. You can use your common sense and battle tactics from there on. Dismissed." They all nodded and left the base to inform their squads and ready themselves.
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Old 03-02-2003, 06:56 PM   [Ignore Me] #8
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Squeeky stepped outside to check if everyone was ready. just then a Young soldier, he could tell from the color of his uniform ran up to an officer already standing and surveying the scene. "Sir! May i request permission to use a Vanguard I hacked in this battle sir!" Squeeky, already seeing the disgust on the officer's face on how a soldier would want to use the NC tank, walked up to the Young Soldier and said "Yes soldier. You may." The officer now utterely confused turned to Squeeky and said, "Sir, why do we permit our soldier to use enemy tanks when ours are surely better?" "You have to think what the Soldier may be capable of doing, and what could come out of the situation. Only good can come from this Young Soldier from Piloting the Vanguard, that he must have hacked. He will most likely be able to take out some enemy Vanguards before his disperses, or it may survive, but the point is, nothing bad could reside from this Soldier choosing an Vanguard over a Prowler." The officer, Obviosuly disgusted, but knowing his rank ended with "Yes Sir!" and about faced and walked away. Squeeky then turned to the Soldier, "You will most likely draw more fire from the NC since you are usuing their tank, but I have confidence you'll be able to get some good out of it. Dismissed." "Thank you sir." And the Young Soldier ran off to his vanguard with a Black and Red color scheme in the distance.

Just as Squeeky turned around he was met with a scout "Sir! The main enemy position has just started to move southwards! There coming!" With a nod Squeeky ran to the intercom "All force prepare to liftoff in 30 seconds, the main enemy unit is mothing southwards, all scouts report in at 2 minute intervals on the enemys position. Air units call it, ground units call in."

"Hamma and Company checking in we are ready to go Sir!" "Whacko and company checking we are ready to go sir!" Screamed the intercom. "All Units lift off and follow your designated plans!" With that he watched a Prowler pull up and stopp infront of him, the hatch popped up and out popped Destroyeron. "I assume you wish to drive Sir?" "Absolutely" Squeeky replied as he took the drivers seat and Destroyeron adjusted his gunners seat custome made massage unit. "Are those legal in a Prowler?" Squeeky said as he raised his eyebrow and buckled in. "Uh...I am unaware sir." Destroyeron said, well knowing that no modifications are to be made to any Prowler without permission. Squeeky laughed and accelerated and Destroyeron closed the hatch to the tank, and switched on the gunners computer.

Squeeky checked his radar as he heard the aircraft fly over the tank. The tanks grouped up and headed towards the enemys last known position. When all of a sudden Squeeky heard little pings and small blasts that sounded like they were coming from near the tank. "Destroy! Do you hear that?" "Yeah I just got past level 3 in Panzer Dragoon Orta!" he said as he was now furiously pushing buttons to kill the boss. "DESTROYERON!!!!!!!" Squeeky screamed. "Yes sir?" Destroyeron replied, while still beating the boss. "Turn that $%@&ing thing off!" Squeeky said, as he rammed into a tree from not paying attention. "Damn you!" Destroy screamed, "You froze it!" as he threw the controller to the ground, opened the hatch and threw the xbox out, then resealed the hatch. Squeeky shaked his head in disbelief as he backed away from the tree. Destroy then flipped on the gunners 'modified' computer and began to pleasure himself. Squeeky then pushed a switch and a black tinted window came down between the gunners seat and the pilots. Ocasionally squeeky heard the sound of wind-shield wipers washing the glass clean, and then the window lowered. "Finished?" Squeeky Asked. "Yes sir, lets kick some-oh shit" destroy said as he flipped on the radar. "Sir, we have company!!!" destroy screamed, as Squeeky punched his radar screen realizing that it hadn't changed in 5 minutes. "Crickey!" Squeeky screeamed "Drop ships drop about 500 yards from the enemy, Reavers start the pounding and tanks move in!"

The Galaxies then swooped in infront of the tanks, dropping MAX's and soldiers. "Stance Betaoa!" Squeeky yelled into the comm link. Then all of the Max's activated their spikes and aimed at the forward moving NC troops, which from here looked about 400. The tanks then moved in between the MAX's and started firing at the enemy, witch made them scatter into the woods. "Your on your own now men" Squeeky said as he took off his commlink and layed it beside him so it wouldn't get in the way.

Then the battle began...
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Old 03-02-2003, 08:11 PM   [Ignore Me] #9
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It's rather long now that I look at it isn't it?
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Old 03-03-2003, 12:57 PM   [Ignore Me] #10
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yep but it is sure the best fan fiction Ive ever seen, its only good that its long
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Old 03-03-2003, 02:15 PM   [Ignore Me] #11
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The battle began quickly, the tanks kept bombarding the New Conglomerate, and they were taking out considerable causulties. It wasn't long until Squeeky looked out the small port hole to his left and saw the Black and Red Vanguard firing its truly impressively powerful 150mm cannon into the bush, it knowcking down everything in its path. If the blast itself didn't get someone, a falling tree or flying rock would.

All of a sudden a report from a scout that was watching the battle came in "Sir there are enemy Vanguards moving towards your positon, about 50 or so I'd say." "Crap!" Squeeky shouted and immediately called for backup from the base "Headquarters! We need more tanks!" He then called in Dr_ron, leading the reavers "Dr_Ron go bomb those Vanguards until Hamma gets back to help!" "Finally!" Dr_Ron yelled into his microphone. "All right guys! We're up!" The whole army heard the roar of 15 Reaver engines piloting up and raising into the air from where they had landed temporarily a few minutes ago.

Dr_Ron as usual made himself first into combat. He had a reputation for destroying a lot of vehicles, but not until he took out atleast a lot of the enemy. He lead his squad, performing his dives and swirls as if he were in an air show to avoid the anti-aircraft missles that came from the ground. When his squad reached the tanks that were behind the main force Dr_Ron opened fire, and so did the rest of his squad following his lead. "Allright guys give them all you got!" Ron screamed into his microphone, and immediatelly his squad broke up, and were pouding the tanks.

Dr_Ron took out atleast fifteen of the tanks before his Reaver was a pile of scrap heap. He was finally taken down when an Anti-Aircraft Max was deployed and targetted him only. Though as a bit of irony Dr_Ron went up to max Altitude, faced towards the MAX, then SLammed on the throttle and ejected. As Dr_Ron fell his kinetic dampeners activated and he hit the ground hard, but Dr_Ron was use to these hard thuds so as he jumped up and dived behind a rock, he turned around just intime to see his Reaver smash fast first in the AA MAX. He smilled in recognition and said "God I've always wanted to do that!" Dr_Ron then armed his mini-gun and flanked the enemy, putting bullets into anything that moved. Not killing anything, but simply providing himself cover fire and damaging enemy forces until he could get back to another Reaver. He made it back and as he passed Destroyeron in his gunner cockpit, who was still firing and picking off the NC in the bushes as if they were sacks of potatoes Dr_Ron grinned at Destroyeron and Destroyeron answered with a scream of "Take that you son of a Bitch!" as he nailed a Galaxy jsut as it was about to drop of its enemy cargo.

By the time Dr_Ron had gotten back to base, Hamma and his squad had arrived back with their mosquitos and Reavers. "Hamma do you read?" said Squeeky over the radio. "I read, Order sir?" Hamma replied. "Finish of those tanks and kill anything that wears blue and yellow," Squeeky replied, grinning to himself because he knew Hamma would do just that.

As Hamma and his squad divided into smaller groups, which they had talked about on the way back from HQ, they were already receiving AA fire, and indirect fire from the tanks. Hamma's squad were seasoned fighters, and were able to simply dodge them and return fire. Hamma went through the rest of the battle covering the NC troops with bullets and Dumbfire missles.

Up until now, the battle had been mainly of tanks and aircraft, which was highly unusual. Squeeky decided that the battle should really start as he spoke into his headset "All Ground troops move forward." Then all of the glorious Terran forces, still enraged about The Unknowns death charged forward, and met a heavy wall of Jackhammers and Guasses. The Terran were highly outnumbered. It was mainly a 3 to 1 battle, the Terrans tried to stay at a reasonable distance where the NC's jackhammers would not be so much damaging, but the Terran were forced to push forward into the heat of battle.

"Sir may I request that tanks move forward to assist our ground men?" Destroyeron said as he tapped Squeeky on the back, who was trying to figure out what to do next. "Yes, good idea," Squeeky said, "All tanks move forward to assist our men out there!" The tanks began to move forward, and some began firing blasts at the back of the battlefield where more NC soliders were rushing in. Once they were in range, many terran forces gathered around the tank to use it as cover. Then Destroyeron swithced from the main gun to the Prowlers secondary Duel 12mm Rotary Chaingun. The Chaingun fired a heavy amount of lead in a short time, and all of the Terran knew not to be accidentally caught in ones fire. The other tanks began to fire the Chaingun as well, and soon the NC were falling back.

The NC kept falling back until there was a hill, the terran drove them up to the top of the hill. The NC fell back down the hill, almost too easily it seemed, and then as the terran forces breached the Hill they gaped in horror, fear, and of all out surprise.

There...standing beyond the hill, were 400 more NC groups waiting for them. Immediately the Reavers and mosquitos rolled in firing, and the tanks followed suite. "Give it all you've got men!" Squeeky screamed into the radio. The Terran rushed forward and were meat with the piercing lead of 400 Jackhammers.
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The Terran did as best they could, but were quickly pushed back by the overwhelming New Conglomerate forces. The Terrans concentrated their fire on the MAX's and heavy armour, so much until that only a few MAX's and heavy Armours remained. The battle still raged on between the normal soldiers. The Terran kept falling back, the tanks providing cover fire with both guns firing like all hell was coming, and it was.

The Terran were down to about 50 men now and about 150 New Conglomerate still remained. It seemed like the end was near for this battle, and the Dropship Center. When all of a sudden, the New Conglomerate troops began dropping dead. The Terran were astonished and puzzled, along with the New Conglomerate, whos puzzled faces turned to atoms dispersed within the air in seconds. "Snipers!" The whole army screamed and ran for cover, completely ignoring the other army. The Terran were amazed at how many their must be, no one sniper could reload that fast.

Squeeky was quite puzzled by where the snipers were coming from. Then on the radio "I see you like our surprise, Commander." It was the Unknown! Squeeky yelled into the radio "Please verify yourself!" "Do I really need to use my name?" Unknown replied. Squeeky fell dumbfounded...Destroyeron seeing how Squeeky was a little shaken screamed into the radio "Charge men charge!" As all the Terran republic rushed forward to finish the New Conglomerate, they were still dropping dead like flies.

It wasn't long before every New Conglomerate had been eliminated from the field. The Terrans all sat down and recovered themselves, some passed out and were Medavacked back to base. Other simply climbed onboard the tanks waiting for the ride home. Squeeky however, was outside his tank, his gunner Destroyeron at his side, puzzling over what happened to the Unknown. His question would soon be answered as the Unknow popped up at his side, followed by 6 other Terran troups, all holding Bolt Drivers.

"Unknown sir, reporting for duty!" as the Unknown snapped to attention. "Yes yes, very good, now you have some explaining to do." Squeeky said as he desperately tried to keep himself composed as Destroyeron rolled his eyes thinking "He always gets so shaken after a battle."

"If I may request sir, that we get some medical attention, and some much needed rest?" "Yes, but only after I've been told what happened." "Well, as you know sir, I was captured by the enemy. 'How?' you will ask? Well it really qas quite simple the way they did it sir, but quite effective also. They used one of their stealth units to drug me, and then I assume that they slipped me into an infiltration suit and activated it, as so they could carry me back to their base without being seen. When I arrived there and was rudely waken up, I was tied to a table, and they began to interogate me. I tried my best not to give up any information, but they used drugs so I am not sure what I may have said, but I am almost positiive it was not anything of major value to us because even in that state I would not have said anything." The Unknown took a deep breathe before continuing with his information, "It was then that they called you, and I spoke to you. That gunshot you heard was fired from one of my interogaters. Luckily for me he was a bad shot and it was justa flesh wound. I pretended to be dead. So after the discarded me I activated the infiltration suit and found these Terran locked up. I freed them, and we all escaped to help you here."

"That is quite impressive" Squeeky said, "Now lets get some rest." Squeeky waved his arms ina circular fashion and the army began its trek back to base.
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The Terran Republic had a gathering after they arrived back at Headquarters. Squeeky addressed the dropship base, "I am all very pleased with all of you. I thank you all for doign a great job, but I belive there is some honorable mention that should be named for display of courage and extraodinary skill. First I'd like to address the flight squads, led by Hamma, Dr_Ron and DarkDragon00, you were a crucial factor in this battle and you have my gratitude. Next were all the ground troops, some who sacrifieced the Ultimate for the Republic, and other who exerted extreme bravery in intense situations. There are too many to list, but I wish to thank you all with condiments downstairs after the celebration.

And on one last note the greatest recognition should be given to...The Unknown." The Unknown walked up onto the stage, his Bolt Rifle gleaming with all its beuty from a recent wash. "to this day," Squeeky continued, "The Republic has never seen as much skill, bravery, courage, and patritotism in a singer soldier. He inspires others and everyone around him, and I thank him greatly." Squeeky moves towards The Unknown to present him with an award and a new rank, but the Unknown refuses with "Sir. I am a soldier. I do what i do, and I do it well, and thats how i wish to stay." Squeeky, halting abruptly, stared at The Unknown, nodded, and said "Thank you all for our great work, especially the Unknown for having given us the enmies location and for recuing 6 of our own that were previously captured. Lets have a round of appluase."

The base erupted with the sound sof clapping ahnds, whistling and thuping feat. "Long Live the Republic!" one soldier shouted out and followed with his mini-gun firing into the air. "Long live the Republic!" the whole base said in unisone followed by the shounds of mini-guns and Cyclers being fired into the air, creating a beautiful fireworks show from all the tracers.

And so, to this day, The Unknowns true identity still remains a mystery, but it can be said, that he will never be forgotten in the Terran Republic.
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Now I would truly say the end here, but I cannot for it truly is...


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