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Old 2013-10-28, 10:04 AM   [Ignore Me] #2
Sonny
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Re: Shell-Shock (TR)


Hi Orisoll,
Don't worry, that intro was absolutely great. The way it is written makes me feel like I'm in the middle of grimy, muddy Hossin, in the thick of the action. Also, I like how you make it seem like a 'real' war, with all its gore and horribleness, a much more realistic different perspective than what the game gives us .

Keep it up! Look forward to reading more,

Sonny
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