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Old 2013-02-18, 05:18 AM   [Ignore Me] #2
First Sergeant
Re: Do No Harm

Hi Carrionghoul,
I missed this one somehow when you originally posted it. A very well-written short story with a good flow and a catchy ending . I love that you also expanded a bit on the respawn tech, how it works and how it is only available to the military. I really like when short stories try to expand a little bit on the background of the war on Auraxis with ideas like that while still fitting into the lore. Keep it up!


P.S. Isn't it sad how it seems that we only have ~ 5 people commenting on the stories here when there seems to be 50 - 100 people reading each story? Come on people, let us know what you think !
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