Feedback on a series I'm making

[UncontainedBoss]

Hey guys,

I've been making YouTube content for the last 4 month and just recently I begun making a series on the NC soldier.

Just wondering if you guys would be able to let me know what you think and where i can improve please

Here is the link to the latest day:

[Rolfski]

I remember I stopped watching these series after it turned out that the very confusing title was not about someone's very first steps as a NC player (which could have been potentially interesting), but merely a generic kill streak montage (of which there are already too many out there).

And for a kill streak montage (which is a very tired genre I would stay away from) there's nothing to it to keep my interest. Be sure to have an unique angle (like exceptional skills) before wasting your efforts on it.

[UncontainedBoss]

Thanks for that man, i will definitely take that on board. At least now I know what I'm doing wrong.